General comments: – Hook/opener:
Consider adding an attention-grabbing first sentence. Why might the relationship between self esteem and SSS matter?
Any real-life examples you can think of? – Definitions: Missing citations for both variables, but definitions are there. – Relevance:
Consider adding a statement in the first paragraph (before getting into the lit review) about how this topic relates to a real-world question or problem.
Lit review:
After describing each study, making a comment summarizing the results’ relevance to your research question.
For example, what did the results of Bai et al. (2021) suggest about your two variables’ relationship?That it might be a positive or a negative correlation?
Rationale:
Again, make sure to state this explicitly. What might this study’s findings be able to clear up about the previous literature’s findings?
References:
Missing running head Various mistakes on Title page; double check the “Resource: APA Paper Template” posted under Week 3 module
