Attention-grabbing

Consider adding an attention-grabbing first sentence. Why might the relationship between self esteem and SSS matter?

General comments: – Hook/opener: Consider adding an attention-grabbing first sentence. Why might the relationship between self esteem and SSS matter? Any real-life examples you can think of? – Definitions: Missing citations for both variables, but definitions are there. – Relevance: Consider adding a statement in the first paragraph (before getting into the lit review) about […]

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