Will the new investment of Boehringer Ingelheim in Greece succeed?

Will the new investment of Boehringer Ingelheim in Greece succeed?

‘Good morning , I have done my Internal Assessment in Business Management (SL) in IB .I have a first feedback from my teacher and I need someone to edit it and completed.’

‘What worries me more is if the writer will have sufficient skills to fulfill especially Criteria C (conclusion); Criteria E (evaluation) and Criteria F (structure) as my teacher says.’

Also there might be some extra research for the subject.