Editing the paper (attached) as per the given notes and any further notes make come within the frame of this document.
Task (research methods concept):
This is an ethical application for a proposed research and the tutor has some confusing notes regarding this document which need to:
• Resolve the annotation on the document (Total 8).
• Resolve the received notes mentioned below:
o It is still rather confused (page 1-3).
o strongly recommend that you drop any reference to focus groups. Apart from anything else you’ll get a lot more data by just doing interviews.
o You need to be clear that you are using TWO research instruments. These are a Questionnaire and an Interview Schedule.
o Resolve the confusing of mixing ideas of the document by focusing on research methods literature to guide your writing.
