Use the points in the statement below to rewrite a best personal statement for the master’s application.

Personal statement for master’s application

Use the points in the statement below to rewrite a best personal statement for the master’s application.

It all started when my family had shifted to my hometown for better education and life. My father started his business with an investment of 400k. Till class 7 I’m an average student. I’m the only one in my family who did secondary education. While I’m doing class seven my father started discussing his ideas, his ambitions, his dreams and social responsibilities. He always discussed the importance of education. I’m always inspired by his thoughts and his responsibility towards the society. My father had big plans for me and his plans motivated me to excel in studies. In a span of decade he made a 400k company to a billion. Now our firm is one of the top in the district with an asset base of more than 6 Billion and employee strength of more than 5000. He is a true inspiration to me, he always inspired me with the way he thinks. He became my hero, my role model and my mentor. His ideas always made me think big and do big. After my secondary school I decided to do my higher secondary with IB curriculum. International exposure will always help to grow further and I strongly believe knowledge always helps us in many ways. While I’m doing my higher secondary education, I always used to research about business structures and models and all business related aspects and also my dad used to regularly discuss about his future plans and aims which kept me motivated every time. His dreams for making billion company to grow further created more interest in me on business management and I want to learn and explore more on management studies and implement those in our business. So I decided to do my management course in the best university. Journey of my father from a remote place where the population is less than three thousand to a company with employee strength of more than five thousand always made me feel proud. My father always said education will teach one to communicate with the world and I always felt management will teach one to do business in a professional way. My father always said “success is not only in making money, success lies in increasing manpower”, He always treated our employees as family. I want to make my father proud and I want to make our company big. I want to expand our wings of business to other sectors and make it multinational. I wanted to increase my knowledge of business models and strategies used by many various organisations and firms which helps me to understand how to understand and tackle every situation faced in individual life and also in an organisation. This made me join “international year one” course at INTO London which helped me in understanding everything which is related to business and also develops my skills to present myself clear and to make all the assignments in an organised way which prepares me to all the tasks and situations that I am going to face in university. International year one in business further got me a very great opportunity to get into “ Manchester Metropolitan University” in to the course of B.A(HONS) business management and the course period of 2 years had made me learn and gain lot of practical theory and knowledge and achieve many opportunities and creative ideas and one of which turned out to be a real time business opportunity. By the end of my course, I have decided to turn my business idea into real time opportunity soon and felt that I need some specific knowledge regarding various operational and management aspects. My real time opportunity is new and much wanted and updated social media platform which would be an instant hit as it would fulfil all the primary needs of today’s modern internet users.to achieve my objective and to achieve my goals only business management and an esteemed university like yours would not only help but also transforms me in to a very successful new age entrepreneur.

Use the points in the statement below to rewrite a best personal statement for the master’s application.
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