Admission Essay
Case: Daniel Frith is a high school student at Jamaica College in 12th grade. He has excellent grades and GPA of 3.74. He is considered outstanding (top 5%) compared to other students in his class and overall performance ranks top 1% among his peers in a class of 42 students. He has the ability to voice his ideas clearly. He is of very good character—polite, easygoing and generous, as well as confident in face of challenges. More importantly, he has a loving and caring heart, actively participating in extra-curricular activities and various volunteer and charitable causes.
He is now applying to colleges to pursue a 4 year degree in Bio-Chemistry & Molecular Biology and thereafter study Medicine to fulfill his dream of becoming a Physician.
Personal Information:
1. Gender Male
2. Age 18 yrs
3. Country of origin/residence – Jamaica
4. Education
School – Jamaica College,
GPA – 3.74
Awards – School Honor Roll, Academic excellence.)
5. Work experience – works during summer holidays and 12hrs per week at a small business
6. Hobbies, – Football
Extracurricular – Chess, Math Club, Unesco Club, STEM club – Vice President
Volunteer activities,
Volunteers on a monthly basis at church through an outreach program with a Retirement home/Nursing home for the elderly.
Community Service
Leadership in service Clubs have supported over 200 youth members since 2020. Participating youth each receive 54 additional hours of hands-on science instruction every year. Youth emerge from the program with greater confidence in their problem-solving abilities and a better understanding of the scientific method.
7. Education/career goals – Physician
8. Skills – Leadership, Critical thinking, Interpersonal, Collaboration, Organized, Versatile, Empathy
9. Student Government: Prefect
Write a Teacher Recommendation in 1000 words or less that connect the details and appealing stuff to form a compelling portrait of Daniel Frith that will wow Admission Officers
