In an application essay explain what would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?

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In an application essay explain what would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time? (350 words)

Edit the below application essay provided.

Application essay:

From a young age, I have always been drawn to entrepreneurship. There is something about the challenge of finding a product or service that people need and then delivering it to them that gets my adrenaline going. And, of course, there is the satisfaction of completing a transaction and making a profit. So, when the fidget spinner craze hit in early 2017, I saw an opportunity and decided to jump in.
I started by researching the market and finding a wholesaler who could provide me with spinners at a low cost. Once I had my inventory, I set up an e-commerce store and started marketing the spinners to my network of friends and family. I also invested in some paid advertising on social media. Before long, I was getting orders from all over the country. In one month, I sold over 4,000 units and made a considerable profit.
Not only was this venture financially successful, but it was also incredibly fulfilling. It was gratifying to see so many people enjoying the product that I had sourced and marketed. The whole experience reaffirmed my belief that entrepreneurship is my calling. Going forward, I am excited to continue pursuing opportunities to bring new products and services to market.
This experience has demonstrated that I have the skillset and drive necessary to be successful as an entrepreneur. Not only did I identify a gap in the market and seize an opportunity, but I was also able to source products, set up an e-commerce store, and market effectively to customers all over the country. This venture was highly profitable, but more importantly, it showed me I have what it takes to be a successful business owner.
Moving forward, I am excited to continue pursuing opportunities in entrepreneurship and positively impacting the world through business. This experience taught me a lot about marketing and sales, and it’s something that I’m passionate about. This is just one example of my innovative thinking and drives to succeed. Given the opportunity, I am confident I will bring the same success to the UC campus’s business school community.

In an application essay explain what would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?
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